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أكاديمية ايجيبت رايت الأدبية :: تحت المظلة
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تحت المظلة
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الكاتب:  Classical boy [ 06 فبراير 2010, 6:32 pm ]
عنوان المشاركة:  تحت المظلة


الكاتب:  سندريلا [ 06 مارس 2010, 4:57 pm ]
عنوان المشاركة:  Re: تحت المظلة

مساء الخير
اولا اهلا بك معنا في الأكاديمية ... اتمنى أن تستمر معنا دائماً و تنير صفحات الأكاديمية بأعمالك و مشاركاتك .. :)
القصة رائعة بحق بداية من العنوان ملفت بشدة و له وقع أدبي متميز ... فكم من الأحداث ممكن أن تحدث تحت المظلة ... تناولت فكرة الحب الأول بشكل هام ... تيقنا جميعاً من أن حبك الأول هو حبك الأخير مثلما قال الرائع إحسان عبد القدوس ... فكم من أشخاص يدخلون حياتنا ... نهتم بهم ... لأمرهم ... نغمرهم حباً و حناناً ... لكن تكشف لنا الأيام ان حياتنا مدرسة نتعلم منها الكثير ... نرى كثيرون ... و نفارق اكثر فتلك هي الحياة ... اما إذا تحدثنا عن جو الشتاء الدافيء الذي عبرت عنه فهو ممتع بحق ... شعرت ببرودة شديدة خارج السيارة و دفء له لذة بالداخل مع صوت جميل مثل علي الحجار وصف رائع يحسب لك ...
تحياتي لك على ما أبدعت مع تمنياتي بدوام التوفيق ..

الكاتب:  Classical boy [ 06 مارس 2010, 5:14 pm ]
عنوان المشاركة:  Re: تحت المظلة

تحياتى سندريلا ولكم كانت رائعة كلماتك ووصف تحليلى بسيط ودقيق ووافى مما يضيف إلى عملى المتواضع فشكراً لك وكم يشرفنى الإستمرار

الكاتب:  dr asmaa [ 06 مارس 2010, 9:05 pm ]
عنوان المشاركة:  Re: تحت المظلة

أهلا بالصديق الجديد فى أكاديميتنا العزيزة

قصتك عباره عن لحظة روجوع يتذكر فيها البطل حياته الماضية مع حبيبته التى جرحت قلبه بلا شعور بالذنب

ولكنه يضحى من أجلها أول القصة كما يحاول يساعدها فى منتصف القصة ويتمنى لها السعادة والأمان فى النهاية

فياله من شخص مثالى ندر ما نجده هذه الأيام

قصة جميلة وأسلوب ممتع

تقبل تحياتى

الكاتب:  Classical boy [ 07 مارس 2010, 12:14 am ]
عنوان المشاركة:  Re: تحت المظلة

د/ أسماء بجد انا مش عارف أقول إيه بس تعليق حضرتك يمكن ورانى حاجات جديدة ف القصة مكنتش شايفها حتى وهى ال3 مراحل اللى مر بيهم البطل وبجد انا شرف كبير ليا إن قدرت أشارك بعملى هنا ف الأكاديمى وشرف أكبر إنه عجب سيادتكم فتحياتى وشكراً جزيلاً

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